So I tried finding them with hope. But there was no sound, no chattering no nothing not a single sound from them but my echo.
As I was walking really slow I heard my group walking and i suddenly found them .
Friday 21 July 2017
One step at a Time
My group and I were walking into a big huge and large forest. As we were walking into the forest I stopped walking and stared at a beautiful tree it was really long and big. As I was staring at the tree my group had suddenly left to another location. It was frightening and scary because I was by myself. A sudden chill ran down my back and gave me a bad thought about the forest and me being alone. I called them and they never had responded to my calling.
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2 comments:
Hey Memory
I really like the strong vocab you used.
What was your favourite activity and why?
Nice job and keep up the great work
Kia ora Memory,
I, too, liked the strong vocabulary that you used for this activity. I found myself leaning forwards towards the computer as I read your story. I was leaning in because I was so engaged in your story and I wanted to know what was going to happen next!
I'm so relieved to know that the story ended well and you were able to locate your group. Phew!
I hope that you have the chance to practice your writing skills in Term 3. I'll look forward to reading more of your work again on the next holiday. We're going to have another learning journey programme in the summer and I would love it if you could join us!
Bye for now,
Rachel (and the Winter Learning Journey blogging team)
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