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Friday 3 March 2017

Organic Blueberries

Organic Blueberries


Tase: cold and tangy


Felt: hard and cold


Smelt: rubbish


Looked: purple and watery

As soon as i grabbed the Blueberry I had a feeling it wasn't going to be great! It felt really cold and hard. I put the blueberry near my mouth and
It smelt like rubbish! It looked purple and watery. When I took a bite at the blueberry it tasted sour and tangy. It melted in my mouth like nothing even happened.

This week we were given organic blueberries to write a descriptive story.
Here Is my descriptive story.

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2 comments:

solomone @ Glen Innes School said...

Nice but you need to fix a sentence

solomone @ Glen Innes School said...

Nice but you need to fix a sentence

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